Samples of my writing

AndrewT · **Posted:** Jan 04, 2012 9:56 PM

Hi guys!

Here's some samples of my writing. Comments and suggestions are most welcome. :yes:

https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0Aa6__jXj-kJcZGY3cXdybnJfOGQzbmRuamdz

https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0Aa6__jXj-kJcZGY3cXdybnJfNmd0Yjl0ZmZi

highradart · **Joined:** Mar 02, 2010 9:54 PM **Posts:** 851

Hello Andrew from Malaysia,

I read a some of the the first one (Hell Boy) and enjoyed it. Especially the dialogue and I could picture the restaurant and bathroom as I was reading it. I did notice some sentence issues (not that mines any better), such as comma placement and I thought the first paragraph (set-up) was somewhat hard to follow (maybe reword it a little). Overall - nice work. :2cents:

Mike

AndrewT · **Posted:** Jan 05, 2012 8:15 PM

highradart wrote:

Hello Andrew from Malaysia,

I read a some of the the first one (Hell Boy) and enjoyed it. Especially the dialogue and I could picture the restaurant and bathroom as I was reading it. I did notice some sentence issues (not that mines any better), such as comma placement and I thought the first paragraph (set-up) was somewhat hard to follow (maybe reword it a little). Overall - nice work. :2cents:

Mike

Hi Highradart! Thank you for your comments. Will definitely look into it.

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